Gaa, I read this and meant to comment on it when you first posted it, but somehow I managed not to. Anyway, I love this extended version! It makes me so happy that they're going to sea together, since it seems like they have the start of a very compatable relationship. Well, maybe not once Horatio starts getting issueful, and I don't know how issueful Captain Adama is since I don't know BSG, but it seems like there could be problems! Are you planning to continue this? Because I'd love to read more! =)