ext_30755 ([identity profile] mylodon.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mylodon 2007-01-25 04:37 pm (UTC)

Re: Varying Shore I - Part II

I do like adama and how he’s just being him, as of course he would, despite being out of place and out of time. IT’s great
Merci - and on behalf of [livejournal.com profile] calavarna with whom I wrote this (and we have great trouble remembering who did what!)

but it’s not the same sort of dilemma for horry since archie is can’t say it out not available just now. But mister guiltfest would find a way to feel he was cheating and since the period is so close to when he had to let archie go,
It's almost as if you've read ahead! Oh the angst proliferates. Yes - Archie nt available - I like that idea.

An accent that spoke of a distant colony and bright blue eyes which reflected honesty could make for a devastation combination if unleashed on a properly receptive audience.
Such a well wrought phrase!!!


And couldn't that all just apply to JB2? I can't think of a better description of him in panto...

Simply brilliant writing. I really like that a lot

i'm so glad you said that cos that's one of calavarna's bits and I HOPE SHE NOTICED!

*giggle*

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