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As promised.

Archie couldn’t believe his luck. Not just at bumping into someone as handsome and serious—he’d always gone for the serious ones—as Horatio, three thousand miles away from both their homes. Speed of pick-up had exceeded all hopes. Normally the more staid the target, the longer it took to persuade them to share a beer or a bed.

Except the uber nerds, of course. They tended to be so amazed that anybody had taken notice of them, especially someone who looked like Archie, that they’d be throwing themselves at his feet. Sometimes he picked them up from there and took them home but often he just left them in his wake. Life was complicated enough, without accumulating clingers on.

“You look knackered.” It was hardly the best chat up line, but Horatio looked like the sort of person who appreciated honesty. Horatio. What a bloody awful name, almost as bad as Archibald, but without the jaunty little diminutive. Horry? No thank you.

“I am. Watch says seven o’clock, body says midnight. Not that I’m too tired to get a bite to eat,” Horatio added hurriedly, edging towards over-eager uber nerd territory.

Archie shivered. He remembered how awful his first days here had been, body clock all to hell and waking at half past two in the morning. He only hoped Horatio—would he ever be able to say that with a straight face—wouldn’t suffer some of the same repercussions of moving here as he had. “It’s not far from here, if we can ever cross the road.”

“Is it always this busy?” Horatio looked right and then corrected himself. “And how long did it take you to get used to everything being on the wrong side of the road?”

“Yes, at this time of day and about a fortnight.” Archie grabbed his new friend’s arm and dragged him over the road before the crossing timer counted down.

“Typical.” Horatio rolled his eyes. “I’ll just have got my head round it and I’ll be off home.”

A fortnight? Time enough, assuming Horatio wasn’t whizzing off half way down the coast the next day. “That’s the way of things. Sod’s law. Still, you’ve got plenty to cram into that time.” Archie stopped, ready to usher them into a tapas bar. “People will make you very welcome.”

“That’s what I’m afraid of.” Horatio smiled, for the first time since Archie had spotted him. If he had an unfortunate name, at least he had the sort of face that made up for it.

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Date: 2011-05-24 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anteros-lmc.livejournal.com
My my! Archie is very confident of himself! Makes one wonder how many he has left in his wake ;)

Poor Horatio though, I think he has a fine name!

Thanks for the latest installment, it's all very intriguing indeed :)

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Date: 2011-05-25 06:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mylodon.livejournal.com
In his wake? Plenty. I see this is an Archie who's either not had a Simpson to contend with or has overcome him, so hasn't been browbeaten.

Intriguing to me, too, because it ain't going where I thought it would.

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Date: 2011-05-25 03:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anteros-lmc.livejournal.com
In his wake? Plenty.
Hmmm...Fly by night? Commitment-phobic? Running from something? Waiting for Mr Right? What's Archie up to?

it ain't going where I thought it would
And isn't that just one of the joys of writing?! :D I shall wait with baited breath!

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Date: 2011-05-25 04:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charliecochrane.livejournal.com
What's Archie up to? I thought I knew but now I;m not so sure...little bugger.

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Date: 2011-05-27 08:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anteros-lmc.livejournal.com
One thing we know about Archie...he can be relied upon to do the unexpected!

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Date: 2011-05-24 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eglantine-br.livejournal.com
Delightful. I want more. You are really building up the suspense.

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Date: 2011-05-25 06:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mylodon.livejournal.com
Thanks. This isn't going where I intended. *smites Archie*

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Date: 2011-05-25 05:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nodbear.livejournal.com
O what a delight the next part - I love this so much ! Archie is indeed full of swagger

and as for the smile and Archie's last thoughts in this snippet

I can see you grinning as you post these -thats why I love them even more !
Keep going - for a nice long while yet !

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Date: 2011-05-25 07:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mylodon.livejournal.com
*nods* This is swaggery, M&R Archie indeed.

Thanks for the kind words. It might indeed take a long time to get this where I originally intended it to be!

BTW I have a teeny weeny Goerge North thing for you!

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Date: 2011-05-25 07:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nodbear.livejournal.com
Teeny weeny George North thing ? * is intrigued *

that is very kind

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Date: 2011-05-25 07:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charliecochrane.livejournal.com
Just a signed card. And any residual DNA on my hand.

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Date: 2011-05-25 07:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nodbear.livejournal.com
Any residual DNA on your hand?

- the art of being naughty in one swift sentence by that doyenne of the game Charlie C

to paraphrase Harriet to Peter as I have done before I think;

you are the mistress of meiosis,M'wah !

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Date: 2011-06-06 06:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emeraldreeve.livejournal.com
Greatly enjoying this and looking forward to more!

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Date: 2011-06-06 10:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charliecochrane.livejournal.com
So am I. Am hoping the muse will strike me soon!
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